This was all a test. To see if I can make a story out of an already existing movie. And the movie I choose:
Haunted Mansion (starring Eddie Murphy)
I don't think I did a good job on the ending, but I wrote it late while doing my character sheet here too. I pretty much stayed up till 3:49 well that's what time it is now but by the time I post this it'll be like..3:52- 3:54 (cali time) cause my dial-up is slow. Well enjoy...sorry fi this or the ending doesn't make sense..
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I'd been trapped in this mansion for many many years.
Waiting for someone to bring my second piece.
I was a very beautiful girl, who had a lover.
Then one night at a ball, celebrating our engagement.
We had invited our friends and servants to join in a dance.
It was my idea to wear a mask.
I still remeber it so clearly...
Though sadly, envy was in that Lover's shadow.
And that envy turned to me.
Envy looked me straight in the eye.
Envy gave me a welcoming smile.
It was envy who gave me a golden cup.
Golden cup full of death.
As my last breath gave I saw Envy turned into death!
Smiling as I died!
The last thing I heard, was "He's mine. He was mine before you came!"
My spirit cried.
Envy had a Homo love. Homo as in the same.
My love found me dead.
With poison in my hand!
And a note that said I was in plot which I couldn't take anymore, cause I would be hurting him.
And that my love for him was fake!
Envy! Envy pretended like he griefed after me.
My dear love couldn't take my death anymore, so he killed himself.
Envy cried and shouted and became a servant of dark.
He sold his soul so he could save my dear love, but in order to save him...
He had to get a second part of me and give her to my dear love.
He had to marry them and kill my second piece, for if that happens.
My dear love would be saved.
My love was trapped in the same mansion as I, but he came back as a ghost.
He knew that I must've not been whole when I died.
Cause the mansion I was trapped in, his familie's mansion.
His a soul sucker. It traps the souls that die in it.
And they do not leave, until one can find light.
One day Envy invited my second piece to the mansion.
This girl looked excatly like me.
This girl...had children and a husband!
As I watched I wondered if Envy will truly go through with this.
But when my lover had invited her to dinner and Envy, with his back turned smiled wickedly.
I knew...I knew he was going to do it!
So in order to save my second piece, I went after her children.
I lead them to a clue which could help them found out Envy's plans.
They soon ran into my lover's servants, the most loyal servants!
And they told them everything, well execpt for the parts only I know.
Like that I killed myself! And with poison!
Then Envy came.
Envy and my Lover never knew I was here all along! My presence is invisble.
They can not feel me here.
Envy looked at loyal servants, knowing that they told.
Later, the father found the fortune teller.
Who told her fortune of something dark being defeated..
A place where things are stored. A place where a light once lived.
How it all began. A place where shells are kept. Under a bridge will be very
murky and under it must be at least 40. But one is all you need. One that has
the key! Then you'll need to find a place where the past gathers around.
The fortune teller being the way she always was began to fright him and send instruments after her.
The father was then told of Envy's plans by the same servants.
Father told them of the fortune he was given.
The servants then realized what it was, something that could stop Envy.
They then went on a quest, figuring out that they must go to a box in my old room.
There, they found a key.
They then went to the masoluem and found another key.
And after that went to an attic and looked around until they found a box filled with my stuff.
They then found a letter, the letter I was planning to give to him before we wed.
They then planned to show it to my love.
But before they could, they were then split.
Envy found out their plans!
He trapped the kids and the man.
As he did that, he...I couldn't believe it!
He tricked my look alike to be in my wedding dress.
Then told her that there was going to be a traditonal ceremony.
I wanted to throw my heel at his head!
Traditonal ceremony alright! Ceremony of marriage!
Knowing that I had no time to waste as Envy prepared the "ceremony"
I then went to the kids first.
They were locked in a trunk being guarded by haunted armor.
In a hallway that had the door behind the trunk locked.
Within the trunk, the children were moving a lot.
The trunk swayed and swayed and swayed.
I went to them and pushed with all my might.
The trunk fell and started to roll.
The guards stayed still as the trunk did this.
Then the children came tumbling out.
The quickly stood to their feet and the guards still stayed still.
The girl suggested that they ran fast, which they did.
As they did, the guards started to move and tried to slice, dice, cut them.
Luckily they made it out alive and started running down another hallway.
I then lead them to their father.
Their father was trapped behind a locked door.
I knew this.
So I lead the kids to my old room to get a key from a music box.
This they did.
I then lead them to where their father was and the girl opened the door.
They then both got hugged by their father.
The father with my letter in his hand decided to show it to my lover.
They ran through the mansion but didn't make it in time.
To tell my look alike about what's going to happen.
They saw my lover asking if she remebered him.
As if I was her, but I wasn't.
I wanted to yell out that she wasn't, but couldn't.
My words are mute from the poison.
Envy then took out a cup of poison and handed it to her.
Now my lover, being the way he was, wanted to kill him.
But the husband got him to listen and to read my letter.
My lover reads it as Envy is shocked.
My love then asks Envy what was going on.
Look alike husband said he killed me.
My love was shocked and asked if it was true.
Envy got upset and then, my goodness!!
The underworld appeared!
I couldn't believe it.
He then revealed his plans and was in fury.
And then was getting sucked in the portal of the underworld.
He tried to drag the husband down with him, but husband escaped.
My love was now upset.
While the family embraced each other.
I came up to my look alike and took over her body.
I talked to my love, who's eyes were now fully of suprise and happiness.
He realized it was me.
We kissed and then I came out of my look alike's body and passed on with my love.
And his servants...
Sun Oct 19, 2014 3:31 pm by Guest
Subject: The Spirit in the Mansion 
